When the rain fell...
category: residue [glöplog]
It was a cold, dark night when Adok made his way back to his house. It had been a good evening at the Mensa club. Nice discussions about racial differences and IQ values around the globe, but still, it didn't feel right. It had been his purpose to convert these souls in 'the demoscene' to see his views on digital art, but they just did not want to listen. Adok sighed, why did they shun his advice, the world still baffled him sometimes.
He lighted a cigarette, a secret habbit that no-one knew of. Not even his Mensa friends, because a Mensa soon-to-be-doctor smoking? An outrage! He took a deep drag and thought about Ulrike, the cute girl living two appartments down from him. He saw her around and knew she liked him, he was the alpha-male! the ubermensch, she saw that. He had planned to make some advances, but had to admit that he just didn't know how. Even though he had an IQ of 224, he just couldn't smalltalk to women and they did seem to like smalltalk, why wasn't it easier! Why couldn't he just tell her "I am Adok! I come to reproduce my powerfull Mensa sperm!!" and everything would work..
He came back to his pad and turned his pc screen on, onto Pouet! There where many posts again, his peon Magic had been spamming the forums again with the views of the rightious. He didn't understand why the Hugi legacy got lost, it used to be such a powerfull diskmagazine, telling people HOW to do it right! The world was just unfair! He was typing a reply to Unseen, the trolling Finnish bastard, when he heard a knock on the door..
A knock? At this hour? Adok got up and looked through the peephole. There she was, Ulrike, she stood there looking unconfortable, waiting for a reaction. He quickly opened the door:
"Ulrike? What are you doing here?"
"Hey Claus, I.. I wonder.. can I use your bathroom.. there.. has been a problem."
Holy shit! A girl wanting to use his bathroom! Ofcourse it was spotless, he kept his pad clean, but a girl in your personal space!
"Sure" Adok said "Come on in, what happened"
She didn't speak, but he saw she was wearing little more than a robe. She quickly went into the bathroom and he went to the kitchen to get a beer, this was one strange situation.
"I'm sorry, something happened in my place" she called from the bathroom, Adok sipped from his beer. "That's ok, what happened?" he asked again.
She came out of the bathroom, her robe slightley loosend. "I had trouble with my boyfriend, he is such an IDIOT!" Adok frowned, a boyfriend? He never saw anybody enter or exit her appartment and by god, did he check!
"Your boyfriend? What did he do?"
"He tried to push it too far, i'm not a lust object!"
He agreed, she was much, much more. She was a beautiful flower in an april shower, a coffee on sunday, a shot of coke on friday, everything he wanted.
"You would never threat a woman bad right?" she asked, looking a bit off, he shuddered.
"Ofcourse not!" he said sternly, sipping from the beer "I'm an alpha-male, I would protect my female at any cost!"
She looked at him with a certain erotism, her hand moving down to her robe belt.
"Do you wanna fuck me Claus?"
He trembled, did she just say the F-word? He sipped a big gulp of beer, carefully trying not to lose his confident stance.
"Ofcourse! You are an alpha-female, good for reproduction, I would gladly inject my perfect seed in your womb"
She looked at him startled.
"I don't know what the fuck you're on Claus, but I want to fuck you sensless, I want to feel another man.. NOW!"
She slid the robe of he shoulders and underneath she was stark, stark naked. He looked at her amazing body, for the first time he saw a naked woman that was not a scanned JPG or his mom, he was amazed at her curves. Slowly she walked towards him.
"Do you want me to suck your cock, Claus.. do you?"
She put her hands on his crotch, he could no longer hide his raging erection, she softly pushed on it.
"I think you want to.."
She slowly unbuttoned his pants while he was still sipping beer. What was going on? How did this woman all of a sudden decide she wanted to mate! What did he emit that she needed him now! He smelled his armpit, no scent. What did attract her!
She took his stiff cock out and slowly started stroking it, he shivered, what a feeling.
"I'm gonna fucking do you Claus! You and your fucking Mensa semen!"
In one swift movement she put his cock in her mouth, he had never felt anything like this before. The feeling was intens. She licked his shaft like her life depended on it, this woman knew what to do with a dick, that was for sure. He let his hands rest on her head, this had to go on forever... this feeling was amazing.
He looked down, her blonde head bobbing in rhythm on his shaft, her robe opened, exposing her perfect breasts. The eagerness exploding from her.
"Let's.. let's go to the bed.." he stammered, she got up and kissed him.
"Sure!"
In the bedroom she let herself drop on the doublebed, showing all her glory to her newfound lover. He looked at her body, what was he to do? He never pleasured a woman before, but he did read lots of books about it! With courage he stepped forward, and investigated her pussy. That was one fine vagina, it was oozing wet, ready to recieve his wanting semen. He stroked the flesh, feeling her shiver under his touch.
"FUCK. do me Claus.. just fucking DO ME!"
He got up, took of his pants and stood stern.
"They call me Farbclaus for a reason! I WILL PERFORM!"
He jumped on the bed, trying to get his erect cock in her cavity. She guided his shaft and he felt the wetness of the secret, forbidden spot.
"That's it you mensa-stud! Thrust! THRUST!"
She screamed at him, while he tried to do what the books thought him, pounding away in her wet hole.
"Is this.. is this ok?" he asked
She didn't react but her face showed a feeling of enjoyment. He kept on pounding, knowing he had to come soon. This feeling beat whacking off with a panty on his hand a million times. He couldn't stand it any longer.
"I'm fucking coming.." he grunted, amazed about using the F-word himself.
"It's fine honey, I'm on birthcontrol, let it slide!" she groaned, trying to mimick his motions.
He felt the feeling emerge, he couldn't resist any longer, she was sucking the life energy out of him, the juice of his existance..
He came in a bang, he blacked out for a few seconds, letting his juice flow freely in her protected womb. She giggled, he looked at her, confused.
"Thanks, my boyfriend is in my toilet crying because he fucking cheated on me, I needed to get back to him, this was the way.. your seed is planted, i'm not on birth control, I hope this makes me pregnant!"
He looked at her in shock, what the.. this woman used him! USED HIS MENSA SEMEN! the filthy whore, this would not stand! He reached backwards grabbing the first object in sight. A huge book, something by Dostajevski, he grabbed it firmly and started pounding at her face..
He pounded and pounded, she struggled like crazy but he was much stronger ofcourse, he was an alpha-male! He pounded the huge book on her face until she stopped moving, the filthy whore, couldn't stand some torment! He looked at her face, the blood streaming down from her hairline, her eyes, her nose.. he messed her up good.
My god..
What had he done! He had lost his virginity and killed the girl he gave it to with a book! He had to do something, her boyfriend was going to miss her any minute! He got up and buttoned his pants up..
he had to undertake action!
He lighted a cigarette, a secret habbit that no-one knew of. Not even his Mensa friends, because a Mensa soon-to-be-doctor smoking? An outrage! He took a deep drag and thought about Ulrike, the cute girl living two appartments down from him. He saw her around and knew she liked him, he was the alpha-male! the ubermensch, she saw that. He had planned to make some advances, but had to admit that he just didn't know how. Even though he had an IQ of 224, he just couldn't smalltalk to women and they did seem to like smalltalk, why wasn't it easier! Why couldn't he just tell her "I am Adok! I come to reproduce my powerfull Mensa sperm!!" and everything would work..
He came back to his pad and turned his pc screen on, onto Pouet! There where many posts again, his peon Magic had been spamming the forums again with the views of the rightious. He didn't understand why the Hugi legacy got lost, it used to be such a powerfull diskmagazine, telling people HOW to do it right! The world was just unfair! He was typing a reply to Unseen, the trolling Finnish bastard, when he heard a knock on the door..
A knock? At this hour? Adok got up and looked through the peephole. There she was, Ulrike, she stood there looking unconfortable, waiting for a reaction. He quickly opened the door:
"Ulrike? What are you doing here?"
"Hey Claus, I.. I wonder.. can I use your bathroom.. there.. has been a problem."
Holy shit! A girl wanting to use his bathroom! Ofcourse it was spotless, he kept his pad clean, but a girl in your personal space!
"Sure" Adok said "Come on in, what happened"
She didn't speak, but he saw she was wearing little more than a robe. She quickly went into the bathroom and he went to the kitchen to get a beer, this was one strange situation.
"I'm sorry, something happened in my place" she called from the bathroom, Adok sipped from his beer. "That's ok, what happened?" he asked again.
She came out of the bathroom, her robe slightley loosend. "I had trouble with my boyfriend, he is such an IDIOT!" Adok frowned, a boyfriend? He never saw anybody enter or exit her appartment and by god, did he check!
"Your boyfriend? What did he do?"
"He tried to push it too far, i'm not a lust object!"
He agreed, she was much, much more. She was a beautiful flower in an april shower, a coffee on sunday, a shot of coke on friday, everything he wanted.
"You would never threat a woman bad right?" she asked, looking a bit off, he shuddered.
"Ofcourse not!" he said sternly, sipping from the beer "I'm an alpha-male, I would protect my female at any cost!"
She looked at him with a certain erotism, her hand moving down to her robe belt.
"Do you wanna fuck me Claus?"
He trembled, did she just say the F-word? He sipped a big gulp of beer, carefully trying not to lose his confident stance.
"Ofcourse! You are an alpha-female, good for reproduction, I would gladly inject my perfect seed in your womb"
She looked at him startled.
"I don't know what the fuck you're on Claus, but I want to fuck you sensless, I want to feel another man.. NOW!"
She slid the robe of he shoulders and underneath she was stark, stark naked. He looked at her amazing body, for the first time he saw a naked woman that was not a scanned JPG or his mom, he was amazed at her curves. Slowly she walked towards him.
"Do you want me to suck your cock, Claus.. do you?"
She put her hands on his crotch, he could no longer hide his raging erection, she softly pushed on it.
"I think you want to.."
She slowly unbuttoned his pants while he was still sipping beer. What was going on? How did this woman all of a sudden decide she wanted to mate! What did he emit that she needed him now! He smelled his armpit, no scent. What did attract her!
She took his stiff cock out and slowly started stroking it, he shivered, what a feeling.
"I'm gonna fucking do you Claus! You and your fucking Mensa semen!"
In one swift movement she put his cock in her mouth, he had never felt anything like this before. The feeling was intens. She licked his shaft like her life depended on it, this woman knew what to do with a dick, that was for sure. He let his hands rest on her head, this had to go on forever... this feeling was amazing.
He looked down, her blonde head bobbing in rhythm on his shaft, her robe opened, exposing her perfect breasts. The eagerness exploding from her.
"Let's.. let's go to the bed.." he stammered, she got up and kissed him.
"Sure!"
In the bedroom she let herself drop on the doublebed, showing all her glory to her newfound lover. He looked at her body, what was he to do? He never pleasured a woman before, but he did read lots of books about it! With courage he stepped forward, and investigated her pussy. That was one fine vagina, it was oozing wet, ready to recieve his wanting semen. He stroked the flesh, feeling her shiver under his touch.
"FUCK. do me Claus.. just fucking DO ME!"
He got up, took of his pants and stood stern.
"They call me Farbclaus for a reason! I WILL PERFORM!"
He jumped on the bed, trying to get his erect cock in her cavity. She guided his shaft and he felt the wetness of the secret, forbidden spot.
"That's it you mensa-stud! Thrust! THRUST!"
She screamed at him, while he tried to do what the books thought him, pounding away in her wet hole.
"Is this.. is this ok?" he asked
She didn't react but her face showed a feeling of enjoyment. He kept on pounding, knowing he had to come soon. This feeling beat whacking off with a panty on his hand a million times. He couldn't stand it any longer.
"I'm fucking coming.." he grunted, amazed about using the F-word himself.
"It's fine honey, I'm on birthcontrol, let it slide!" she groaned, trying to mimick his motions.
He felt the feeling emerge, he couldn't resist any longer, she was sucking the life energy out of him, the juice of his existance..
He came in a bang, he blacked out for a few seconds, letting his juice flow freely in her protected womb. She giggled, he looked at her, confused.
"Thanks, my boyfriend is in my toilet crying because he fucking cheated on me, I needed to get back to him, this was the way.. your seed is planted, i'm not on birth control, I hope this makes me pregnant!"
He looked at her in shock, what the.. this woman used him! USED HIS MENSA SEMEN! the filthy whore, this would not stand! He reached backwards grabbing the first object in sight. A huge book, something by Dostajevski, he grabbed it firmly and started pounding at her face..
He pounded and pounded, she struggled like crazy but he was much stronger ofcourse, he was an alpha-male! He pounded the huge book on her face until she stopped moving, the filthy whore, couldn't stand some torment! He looked at her face, the blood streaming down from her hairline, her eyes, her nose.. he messed her up good.
My god..
What had he done! He had lost his virginity and killed the girl he gave it to with a book! He had to do something, her boyfriend was going to miss her any minute! He got up and buttoned his pants up..
he had to undertake action!
oh noes okkie has been kidnapped by optimus!!1
i can't be fucked to read all that
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"Ofcourse not!" he said sternly, sipping from the beer "I'm an alpha-male, I would protect my female at any cost!"
She looked at him with a certain erotism, her hand moving down to her robe belt.
"Do you wanna fuck me Claus?"
He trembled, did she just say the F-word? He sipped a big gulp of beer, carefully trying not to lose his confident stance.
"Ofcourse! You are an alpha-female, good for reproduction, I would gladly inject my perfect seed in your womb"
VULVAE POWER !
Aw I wanna know what happens next. :(
and suddenly all
what a bitch
but thumbs up for the story, okkie!
story? wasn't it for real? :)
very realistic story i think!
not bad at all, thumb up.
adok fanfiction rules!!!
usually I expect more subtle insights into the mind of the storyteller, but this was pretty extreme.
Someone suddenly has a lot of spare time :) You still have touch for this kind of stuff dude, let's bring the novel scene back to life, now we live in the age of EBOOKS! (oh, shit...)
yes!!! go okkie!!
i expect a full novel by the end of the year! =)))
i expect a full novel by the end of the year! =)))
heh, thanks all :) expect part 2 soon!
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heh, thanks all :) expect part 2 soon!
Yay \o/ Can't wait. :) Thumb up for the first part. :)
If you remove the shit about races and change the name of the girl, the story is OK.
i suppose you change the girl to this:
article for hugi? :D
I just started to re-read this:
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This is crap. This gives the impression that people in Mensa clubs are talking about racial differences all the time. This is simply not the case.It was a cold, dark night when Adok made his way back to his house. It had been a good evening at the Mensa club. Nice discussions about racial differences and IQ values around the globe, but still, it didn't feel right.
Adok: well, in my story it is!
and 'pouet.net troll', you're a fucking unoriginal faggot and you should leave this thread.
and 'pouet.net troll', you're a fucking unoriginal faggot and you should leave this thread.
okkie: I thought your story was intended to be realistic...
okkietje, is that one of the sideeffects from your starvation program? :(