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Tears of Pain by Bad Karma
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added on the 2003-08-11 14:44:35 by Zale  |
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I am worthless, I hate myself?
Lol. Is this a download for me? :)
Lol. Is this a download for me? :)
oh... boohooo, poor me... :_(
i'm 14 and nobody understands me :_(
yuck
Oh my, what a postive and uplifting experience. Perhaps if I ram this thumb far enough down your throat you will regurgitate some more of thos hippy feelings.
the poverty of this demo is killing me... MUHAUHAUAUAH what a lame play of words there :P
Ok demo, but those lyrics are just sooo pathetic.
it's amazing to see how lyrics do always spoil a production.
no.
http://maddox.xmission.com/suicide.html
can we have less scene poetry please? I say a ban on the use of words such as :"pain, loneliness, fear, tears, feelings, dark, angry, black, sky, rain (rhymes with pain), blood" would be a good thing for the demo scene. Or maybe people should start to rip "commercial" poems. :)
I write a lot of poetry (http://www33.brinkster.com/fearmoths/galore.htm - for a taste) and so I know what I'm talking about.
You think poetry is just about saying the first thing that comes into your head but it's not cos the same thing comes into everyones head and it all sounds the same.
No one gives a damn if you feel sorry for yourself cos we all have our problems and your poem doesn't relate to us.
You've gotta think deep. You've gotta think of fresh ways of saying what you mean in an interesting way. Use imagery to make it more enjoyable and let the message creep through in the symbolism.
That's just my tip. Poetry can be great but theres good poetry and theres bad poetry and this is bad. I hope you won't kill yourself now cos then I would have to write a poem to share my guilt and self-loathing with everyone.
You think poetry is just about saying the first thing that comes into your head but it's not cos the same thing comes into everyones head and it all sounds the same.
No one gives a damn if you feel sorry for yourself cos we all have our problems and your poem doesn't relate to us.
You've gotta think deep. You've gotta think of fresh ways of saying what you mean in an interesting way. Use imagery to make it more enjoyable and let the message creep through in the symbolism.
That's just my tip. Poetry can be great but theres good poetry and theres bad poetry and this is bad. I hope you won't kill yourself now cos then I would have to write a poem to share my guilt and self-loathing with everyone.
good design but music is a little poor
it could be interesting but it's too boring... and crashed my desktop at the end
Cool graphics and nice design, but about the 'suicidal'-theme I would say:
The combination of the music and the teenage angsty poetry is humorous, but it's much better than your previous effort. Waiting to see what you come up with next year :)
nope
Had to press Escape after about 1 minute which equals auto thumb down.
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