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This is my first prod, thanks to see! :)

Minha primeira produção, obrigado!

downloadlink doesnt work...

Quite different but was nice to watch.

The music (from a game?) didn't fit AT ALL imo. Camera was weird somehow and there was damn lot of really weird stuff :) Weird stuff doesn't count as bad necessarily though. Wasn't an eye candy neither. BUT, first prod and it made me think of "forces of the pyramids" so it can't be too bad :)

The music choice was so bad imo + there's a lot of unused scenemusic that you could use that i'll give it a piggy.

Corret link to download is:
http://solstice.scenesp.org/leo/cydonia.rar

I have now reported this bug in "fixme" post :)

Cool firstprod

why did it seem the camera was constantly on a 'i look sideways'-angle.. or maybe the videomode screwed up..the scene needs some proper lighting to look slicker and less bland, but it has potential.

Thanks to all coments! XD
pk, thanks to fix url, upload and hosting file... gracias! :)

first prod

[+] First prod.
[-] Total crap! :(

Make something better next time. It's important to watch as many demos as you can. It's very inspiring and helps you improve yourself as time pass by.

Piggie.

I don't know how you did it, but you crashed my firefox. I hope you improve in all aspects.

simple but very nice imho. and the jpop/cpop or what ever is also a nice one. what's the name of it? would like to have the mp3 or module :D

nice modelization :)

the music is uhm *special*...

masterm: to imitate other demos ? you're so wrong !

I agree with Serpent that the music doesn't fit at all. And I reminded me of the "forces of the pyramids" as well. :) Not bad for a first demo, even though it's pretty boring. The visuals are nice and it's ok to watch. So, piggy. =)

Kind of trashy - like it!

@imbusy: FireFox crashing can be considered a normal feature of operation for that browser... ;o

Beautiful! This demo could get thumbup without being called "first one".=)

crashed here.. both modes

zest: inspiration != (imitation || copy).

Everyone has a source of inspiration. Great painters watched art, great musicians listened to music during their life. And it didn't make an imitation from what they created.

Thanks very much for all coments.
Serpent: ya, the music is from a game "Tenchu 3" (XBOX and PS3), thank you for your coment ;)
masterm, thanks for yours observations and comentaries.
StingRay, thank you.
Thanks, thanks, thanks... my second demo coming sun, 60% complete xD
Sorry for crashes (Directx 9 required) and FIreFox bug, really sorry.
And sorry for my bad english, i not speak it. I speak portuguese, from Brazil. Eu falo português, do Brasil :D!

CoaXCable:
I dont know the name os this music... is oppening theme of the game "Tenchu 3" (XBOX and PS3 game) ;)

Mental.

- zillions of polys are a waste
- runs slow
- ugly colors
- waste of music
- no synch

Needs a lot of work to be categorized "rulez" - Piggie is ONLY for the fact this is a 1st prod - cheer up and back to the sketching table!

"36875240 polygons realtime"

i'd love to give it a for being a first prod, but it bugged on my machine, and it would have needed much more work.

next one will be better.

Well seems you like Cydonia Region on Mars, eh? ;) ... I like that topic too but the demo is still a boring 3d flyby which wasnt that fast on my machine too... but yeah it has potiential... its ok. keep going!

...btw I have fixed your crewname to Cortex Corp.

Because it reminds me the crappy 1998 accelerated days :)

it's always nice to see new people getting into demos, but this prod is not very good, sorry. keep working though :)

It's good for a first prod!
the following can be improved:
- dumps file when executing (this is not allowed in most compos)
- linear interpolated camera movements, not very nice.. (look into bsplines - not necesarrily bezier curves the first thing you do) it's easy to implement on top of the linear interpolation you already have in place
- NeHe GL example quality of effects, do something interresting with the particles..

I'm sure you'll do a lot better next time :)
some hints anyway..

much flyby and camera use was not nice

ltk_tscc :

Thank you to fix my crewname and thanks for comentaries ;), i an a extreme

newbie in scene and i need learning more. In this moment i making my 2nd

prod whit exaustive tests to get a best performance, visuals and effects.

Yes, my english sucks, i know and sorry :(

jaw :

Thanks for comments!! I like, really! :D

leo: show up on ircnet #scenept :)

thumb for the effort.
now try to improve and ignore the pouet jerks

What jaw said. For a first prod, this is very good.. hope to see your next one soon :)

... and for everybody who doesn't know about the cydonia region on mars click this

i hope it will be your last prod too

ps :
Thanks for your invite! =D
Thanks for all comments =)
ltk_tscc : lol, good link! =)~

Your English is fine (:

as soon as the first scene appeared i had a strange feeling that this was made with some uncredited third-party 3D engine.

just press alt-tab during the demo, and see that i was right. (or decompress the exe, etc.)

that and the terrible music would result in a massive thumbdown - but i'm a nice guy.

How lame.

Gargaj :
Credits to programs used to make my demo?
Is really nedeed?! Ok, sorry for inconvinience... :(

Cydonia; Staff:
3D engine:
Right Hemisphere Deep Creator
Exe compressor:
UPX
Textures:
From internet, edited by me whit paint 5.1
Models:
From internet (others from my brain using DC model editor ;))
SO:
Windows XPSP2
Keyboard, monitor, mouse, hardware and my imagination
Thats right?! ;)

oh yeah lets start to credit the authors of your coding tools too and photoshop and all music software creators... yeah ;)

hey ltk_tscc :
Thank you very much for fix the screenshoot, crew name and nfo file!
You rules! =D

will deep creator be the new osdm for 3D gfx?!

toxie :
osmd is a compiler of intro's almost ready
deep creator is an engine 3d and requires programming

... but it is very simple to use =)
(without undeserving osmd that I think an excellent maker)

still like it as a first try

wtf

Awesome!