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I'll get a couple of negatives out of the way first, tune is great but a little short, secondly, the pacing is a bit off imo. Aside from those issues, everything in this demo is great, I just wish that there was something to break up the scroll/end section. There's a good amount of cohesion here though, my favourite part is the yellow melty thing that appears about a minute and a half through but all the scenes are cool, a thumb from me, check it out! :)